For immediate release
Jan. 21, 2008
Real Estate Investments for the Average Joe
ABC Real Estate LLC
123 Creative Way, Logan UT 84341
801-555-4567
President Bret Cob
Logan, Utah
LOGAN, Utah-ABC Real Estate LLC is using a creative way to help those that are inexperienced or who feel incapable to get involved in real estate investing. They use land trusts to optimize return for all investors. These trusts have been used for years among the rich and famous, and are now made available to the general public through ABC Real Estate.
Pres. Bret Cob said, “I don’t care about making a lot of money, I care about helping people.” ABC Real Estate takes care of all the paper work and ensures that payments will be made for at least 60 days to minimize risk for investors. In essence what ABC Real Estate has done is they use beneficiary directed equity holding land trusts and through these trusts they have taken all the characteristic of an ideal home buyer or real estate investor and have divided the characteristics among four people, “mitigating risk and maximizing gain” to allow more people the option of receiving a greater return on their investment. Cob said, “I will guarantee a 10 percent APY on the investment, but it is likely to see up to 40 percent.”
ABC Real Estate was founded by Cob in 2007 based out of Draper, Utah. They have just created a strategic partnership with Evan Nielson, who will be opening a branch in Logan making the opportunity more accessible to citizens of Cache Valley.
“ABC Real Estate is looking for people that have money and want to get involved in a high return safe investment, also people with good credit scores who want to use their credit to make some money, and resident investors to live in the home who may want to build credit” Cob said.
Anyone interested in learning more about this investment opportunity can contact Bret Cob or Evan Nielson at the contact number above.
Media Contact:
Justin Badger
801-787-9595
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2 comments:
I think you did a great job! I liked all the quotes, it definitely makes it more realistic!! It sounded very professional and it described everything very well. It was easy to follow and to understand!
When a formal title is listed in contact information and not in the story, it is alright to capitalize and write it out.
You need a dateline attached to the beginning of your lead.
I like your title.
I would avoid unclear, relative, and subjective terms in your lead like "big time real estate investors." Besides, that's inaccurate, as ABC Real Estate's goal is not to get people to become big real estate people....instead, they hope to help people get involved in real estate who otherwise feel like they can't.
In your lead, I would mention land trust, but leave the entire title for later in the story. Putting "beneficiary directed, equity holding land-trust" is likely to confuse and make readers less interested.
Trust is singular so it would read "this trust" or "these trusts" not "these trust" as you have it.
Instead of having two back to back quotes separated, just join them into one quote separated by elipses. The quote about ABC taking car eof the paperwork isn't particularly interesting or unique. Concider rewording or not quoting it. otherwise, I approve your quotes.
You do need a boilerplate right before your clal to action sentence. Something including, bret as the founder, started in August 2007 in Draper Utah. Nothing huge, just simple.
You need to list yourself as a contact person also.
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